Kelley, Your poem was very good I laughed harder than I probably should. One wag of the finger is in your last line of your haiku you could say, "They're fat and lazy instead of "Is fat and lazy" but other than that, it wasn't to crazy.
Kelley, I related to your poem and understood My lazy cat stays more still than a piece of wood However, your last line was a bit confusing There wasn't a complete thought, but the rest was amusing
Kelley,
ReplyDeleteYour poem was very good
I laughed harder than I probably should.
One wag of the finger is in your last line of your haiku you could say, "They're fat and lazy instead of "Is fat and lazy"
but other than that, it wasn't to crazy.
Kelley,
ReplyDeleteI related to your poem and understood
My lazy cat stays more still than a piece of wood
However, your last line was a bit confusing
There wasn't a complete thought, but the rest was amusing